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PostPosted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 7:59 pm 
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[font=Arial, sans-serif]Its a Rich Mans World
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Part 1: Intimidation? – No! – Encouragement…

[size=92]“So this is Jamaica?â€

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NPCs:
[1] Class A Thug
[5] Class A Gunmen
[1] Class B Theif
[2] Class A Drug Dealers
[4] Maids/cleaners
[5] Chefs/cooks
[2] Receptionist
[1] Manager
[1] Accountant
[2] Sailors
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Vehicles:
[1] Mercedes CLS500
[1] Yacht 'The Lady Luck'
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Weapons/Equipment:
[5] AK-103
[3] Parker-Hale M-85
[6] Kevlar vests
[3] Berretta 92G ELITE II
[1] Baseball bat
[1] MP5
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Property:

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Misc:
[1] Ski mask
[1] Gloves
[1]Lockpick kit
[8] NVGs


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PostPosted: Wed Mar 22, 2006 4:45 am 
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OK, I'll be flat out honest. I should deny this. Why? First, you rushed trough it. You try and make it look big by the dialouge you waste with the NPC's. Don't get me wrong tho', the part where you tell him to sign over the thing is great, but It just isnt enough to take over a business. So here is my ruling;
Ownership of the New Kingston Hotel & Spa - Denied Now Like I said, if you do the thing over and make it a little realisitc. I mean would you really tell him if he asked you what you would do with him and shit? Nah... But I'll be nice on the other requests and approve all NPC's why? Because I know you'll do a better job, so you can have the NPC's, just do a take over for a hotel and you'll be set.

That's all I got for now, enjoy the NPCs.


PS: I dont know what font size you are using but 2,949 words isnt even close to 6 pages. : D.

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[Eli The Dealer; Said;]
Get off my nuts, faggot.

[Mr. BigValboski; Said;]
How could you leave MSRP! FAGGOT! TRAITOR!

[Eli The Dealer; Said;]
Just like when I left your mom after I fucked her without a condom, and she became pregnant with you.

[Mr. BigValboski; Said;]
My mom killed her self

[Eli The Dealer; Said;]
Yeah, so would I if I was her, I mean raising a kid like you by her self... damn... good for her.


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