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M.S.R.P. II • View topic - Gettin' The Goods

M.S.R.P. II

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 Post subject: Gettin' The Goods
PostPosted: Sat Mar 11, 2006 10:25 pm 
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[size=75]New York State Prison
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Antonio’s grandfather had been a mafia hitman for almost his whole life. Starting to contract killing’s when he was just seventeen years old, now sixty-nine, his grandfather had retired, not by will, but by force. He had been convicted for over three hundred murders, and none other then a rat had put him behind bars for the rest of his damned life. Antonio had been there when they arrested his grandfather, just a week ago. The F.B.I stormed into the house, guns aimed and ready to shoot anything that moved in the wrong direction. Antonio had been ready to kill for his grandfather’s safety, but his grandfather was not going to let him be gunned down by some scum FBI agents. Antonio had ran out the back of the house, back to his small apartment. Now for the past week, he had been in meetings with his grandfathers, ex employer. They already had someone in line to take out the rat, who snitched on the best hitman they had in thirty years. Antonio was now at the prison, possibly talking to his grandfather for the last time.

[i] “Now, listen to me Tony.â€


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Ah, I'm a little unclear about what 'lock' button you're talking about...Right before you jump for joy, what lock button did you push? After you answer me that, I'll grade your thing.


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You know, the small keypad that newer cars have. Where it has unlock, lock, alarm, and like the trunk or something. Usually, when you push the lock button, the horn honks and the lights flash.


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Gotcha.

Alright, the heist itself (Like the subject matter)was pretty ehish. I do appreciate the fact that you did a little treasure hunt type thing in here, rather than just going to the house, picking the shit up, and then leaving. I didn't really understand how your grandpa had been arrested a mere week ago, but had already been convicted of over three hundred murders. Btw, if he had comitted three hundred murders, he was a real asshole. Ah, the grammar isn't perfect, but it's definately not bad...so I'm not gonna waste your time by referring you to the Training Center. "Inside the suitcase was a pair of leather gloves, a ski mask, a lock picking set, and a small switchblade". I noticed you didn't request those things...not sure why you'd mention them if you didn't want them, so I'll go ahead and toss them in. I also wanted to let you know, that if you had put a little more effort forth, you could've gone ahead and taken over this house...thereby giving you a place of residence. It's not too late, feel free to do another heist taking this place for yourself..

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-Inside the suitcase was a pair of leather gloves, a ski mask, a lock picking set, and a small switchblade APPROVED
-06 Dodge APPROVED
-Sniper rifle crap APPROVED
-Extra ammo APPROVED


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