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M.S.R.P. II • View topic - Pistol Whipped [NPC Takeover/ NPC Hit]

M.S.R.P. II

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A sick smile grew on David's pale white face as he walked down the dark streets of Brightmoor, it was getting warmer and warmer as the days went by as Spring hit. David was dressed in all black and a long trench coat covering his weapons, on him were two Sig Sauer P220, three knives, and two axes. David was had been planning a takeover of a butcher shop for a while now, he needed some where he could work, after all, it would be an easier way to cover up for all of the blood. David was just now outside of the butcher shop, he looked around at it, it was pretty nice, the front entrance was clean, and by the looks of the blue prints he had seen when he snuk into the manager's office had a nice spacey area to do his work. David finally decided today was the day, a lot of employees were out sick due to the flew that had been circulating around lately and the only people there was the manager and the teenage cashier. As crazy as David was, he was still clean when he needed to be, and smart when he needed to be also. David entered through the front door of the Butcher shop when he was greeted with a fake smile.

"Welcome to the Detroit Butchers, we chop em' you eat em'."The cashier said lazily.

David looked at the teenage boy with acne and a lazy eye. He was disgusted at the look at the boy, David thought it was disgusting someone would let a kid like that work with food. David was phsycotic, killed for a living, and enjoyed blood, but some how he was disgusted, by a kid with a lazy eye and acne. David thought,'This scum doesn't deserve to, live'. David looked at the cashier and managed to put a slight smile on his face.

"Can I speak to your manager please? I'm here for the butcher job." David said directing it to the boy.

"Yes sir, one moment please."The boy said as he turned around.

The boy walked to the office and knocked on the door three times before speaking once more.

"Hey boss, there's someone here for an interview."The teenager shouted.

"One second please, tell him I'll be right out!"The manager shouted back.

The cashier walked back to the cash register and looked at Dave.

"He'll be out in a second."the disgusting teenager said.

Dave couldn't stop looking at his lazy eye and red face, it was almost making him want to grab him right then and there and smash his head against the wall repeatedly. None the less he held back his urges to slaughter this boy. Finally the manager came out, Dave was relieved, a second longer the boy would be dead. The manager was a true fat ass, David wouldn't be surprised if he would die from obesity if David wouldn't be shortening it.

"So, you want a job kid?"The fat man said.

"Yes."Dave said.

"Do you have an experience?"The manager said.

"Yes."David said remembering all the men and women and children he has butchered in his life.

"Well let's go to the back and see if you really do know ho to butcher a pig."The manager said.

"Ok."David said almost grinning with the image of the fat manager hanging on a meat hanger going through his head.

The fat-ass started walking towards the meat locker with David fallowing behind him. The fat ass walked slowly limping almost as if he was about to fall over right then and there. Dave felt an urge to shank him right there in front of everyone, but he was just too clean. Finally they reached the meat locker.

"Here is the meat locker, this is where we store the meat to keep it fre...."The Fat ass said before getting interrupted by Dave.

David gripped his gun from his holster and pulled it out revealing it to the rest of the dead meat, he swung it diagonally hitting the back of his neck, knocking the fat ass out. The manager fell hard with not word said, and not even a loud noise heard. David grabbed the body of the fat ass and started to drag him by his feet. David pulled his hardest, the fat ass was so fat it was hard to get him into the corner, but after 30 seconds of pulling the body he got it to a corner. Now the body as hidden' from anyone else who might walk by. Now with the manager knocked out, the only one left was the teenage greece bucket. David stood up straight and hid his gun again in his holster. He walked back out of the meat locker and yelled to the teenager.

"Hey, kid, your boss wants you."Dave said.

The greece bucket nodded and walked to the meat locker, behind him David fallowed. Finally when they reached the meat locker the teenager turns around to Dave. But before he could say anything David pistol whipped him, knocking him out. he hid his gun once more and grabbed the body and pulled it into the corner of the meat locker laying the bodies in the corner. David left the meat locker and walked to the front room and turned the open sign to closed and locked the door. He grabbed a meat cleaver that was laying on the counter next to the cash register and walked back to meat locker. He saw the fat ass and the greece bucket leaving with each other. David couldn't stand seeing two scum laying there in peace. Dave walked to the bodies and lunged the cleaver into the fat ass's back killing the scum. Last one left was the teenager. Dave imaged a bucket of proactive and shoving his face into it, but there was none, and Dave couldn't wait any longer to kill him. Finally, Dave swings the cleaver diagonally and lunges the cleaver into the neck of the teenager. David would now start the butcher process.


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Requests:
X amount of money in cash register
Takeover of the Butcher shop
Death of Greece Bucket
Death of Fat ass
Evidence of their death gone
[x1]Meat Cleaver
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Note: The Butcher shop will not be made for profit, so basicly I will own it and not get any profit from it, the place will be closed, almost 24/7, it will just be here for my future jobs, and a place for meetings.


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Requests:
X amount of money in cash register APPROVED
Takeover of the Butcher shop APPROVED
Death of Greece Bucket APPROVED
Death of Fat ass APPROVED
Evidence of their death gone APPROVED
[x1]Meat Cleaver APPROVED

You get $5000.00, the Butcher Shop - but as you said, its not for profit. The two NPC men are dead, and the evidence is gone. You also get [1x] Meat Cleaver.

I enjoyed the read and thought it was a good plot, however I noticed a few typo errors.

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