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M.S.R.P. II • View topic - My loyalty is to Mosca, Death before Dishonor [NPC Recruit]

M.S.R.P. II

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It was a nice day out, sitting at a local bar, where it was alright. Hitting on the few girls that where not hitting on Chris, the fun part of the day. Getting laid would be worth it, but Chris was HIV census, he didn't want a bitch that had them, He always got'em checked before he took them to his bed. It was pretty funny though how Moe was slow to all this, Though Moe had been meaning to talk to Chris about something. Moe tapped Chris on the shoulder and asked, “Well, My cousin. He wants in.” Chris looked up at Moe and laughed, “He only thinks that.” Moe shook his head and said, “No really he does badly. Give him a shot I told him I would put in word for him.” Chris shook his head. “No.” He said again to Moe. “Come on, at least talk to him.” Moe said. “Fine, fine.” Chris said as he rubbed his chin. He looked over at Moe and patted him on his back. Chris asked, “Where are we going to meet this guy?” Moe then said back, “Well. I was thinking tonight at his place.” Chris shook his head and stood up so did Moe, they walked to out, and to his Ferrari, Chris wanted to get this over with and talk to the guy.

When they arrived, Chris and Moe walked side by side to Moe’s cousins house his name was Frankie. Chris coming up to the door raised his hand and knocked on the door twice. The bounding on the door alarmed Frankie, he got up and answered the door when he saw Chris and Moe and smiled and said, “Thank you for coming.” Chris really didn’t say anything and Moe smiled and nodded, as they stepped in Frankie said, “Please sit down.” Chris and Moe sat down, Chris looked up at Frankie, and asked, “Do you have a gun?” Frankie stood up and walked to his room, he bent over and grabbed the Glock 18 that was under his bed, he walked back to the living room where Chris and Moe where seated. He showed Chris and laid it down in front of him. “Take a look at this big boy.” Frankie taunted. Chris busted out laughing and grabbed the handle to his Desert Eagle that was tucked under his belt. “Take a look at this!” He said as he pointed it at Frankie, Moe looked over and was laughing in his head seeing how Chris was scaring the fuck out of Frankie. Frankie confused said, “Oh oh, that’s nice.” Chris laughed as he put his dessert eagle down, he asked. “What makes you think you can roll with me?” Frankie looked at him and said, “I’m a straight up gunman.” Chris wanted to laugh on that but held it in. “We’ll see. You got to prove yourself.” Chris said. “Alright.” Frankie answered with a smile on his face.

Frankie, Moe, and Chris were waiting ready for something to go down. they where walking down the alley news of a small crew growing in the area alarmed Chris he knew he had to go take care of it before it turned into a threat, they where for men strong, and where hustling and selling dope on Mosca’s turf. Chris heard these guys where posting in a few allies it was not hard to find stuff out about sloppy people. All three being armed were ready to kill the men. Coming up to the ally where the men hanged out and sold things the most at Chris looked behind him at Frankie and Moe and said, “Pull guns on them as soon as we see them alright?” The two nodded, as he turned the ally Frankie and Moe behind him Chris grabbed the handle of his Desert Eagle and pulled it out, he swung it up and aimed loosely at the man who was known as Max, He was the leader Chris had seen him around. Frankie and Moe also pulled out they’re guns and pointed them at the rest of the men. Chris looked at him and shook his head, “Don’t even pull’em out, We’ll waste you faster then a rabbit gets fucked!” Max knew this was no bluff after the killing he had heard that Chris did to a few men Mosca wanted dead. “What do you guys want?” Max asked. “You work for us if your dealing on our turf cock face.” Chris said, Frankie was new to this and was hesitant on pulling the trigger if he had to. Chris on the other hand would do it fast. “Yeah? Well suck the big one!” Max yelled as he began to reach for his gun, He was dumb to do so, Chris already was aiming his Desert eagle at him he pulled the trigger back once. This made Max fall down the 2nd shot that Chris fired blew him to his death. Max’s crew reached for the weapons as well after Max getting shot twice. This is the part where the dramatic opera music starts playing. Since Chris’s crew already had a gun out on them, It was no fight they bullets flooded into the air and killed the crew with no time before any of them could lift they’re guns out. The shooting stopped when Chris stopped firing which was when he was sure they where all dead. They split fast it was dark out so they had the night to cover them.

Frankie had proven his worth, and Chris let him hang with him. They had one more job to do that was to go out and party. Frankie even went. Chris of course brought a gun, and told Moe if he had a girl with him to take Frankie and himself to Frankie’s place and let Chris and girl be alone. They went to a local night club a good one where Chris got into for free he got Frankie and Moe in, the two where stiffs compared to Chris. Having a good night as always Chris leaned against the bar next to Moe, and Frankie an pointed to a very hot brown haired tan women that was dancing. “She’s a freak.” Chris said. “How can you tell?” Frankie said. “It’s a gift.” He answered. “Like you could tap that.” Moe said laughing. Chris was not laughing though, he looked at her again and said, “Man, she’s one of those Freakie bitches that will be your personal fuck buddy.” Chris said. “Yeah well proof it.” Frankie said. Chris couldn’t back down at this point. He walked up to her from behind and clinched his hands on her hips and she turned around, then looked back forward, she then began to bottie dance against him. Frankie and Moe watching where amazed. Moe looked at Frankie and shook his head, “Lucky fuck.” At the end of the day, Frankie and Moe went to Frankie’s while Chris took the girl to his house where Chris and the girl who told him his name, “Eva” did the naughty.

The next day Eva woke up alone his Chris’s bed. She got up naked, and began to put her cloths on she walked in to the kitchen to find Chris making eggs and bacon, she put a smile on and said, “Call me anytime you want me to come over” She left her number on the table and walked out. “Not even gonna stay for breakfast” Chris said to himself. He shrugged and sighed. The only thing was that he never asked Eva if she had HIVs or AIDs…like she would say yeah if she did. He went to a clinic and got checked he tested negative for everything. So he was clean.

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Death of Max's crew.
Gunman "Frankie" as NPC
Fuck Buddy "Eva" as NPC


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Grabbed. An hour or so, please.

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"Census" refers to scheduled population count survey. I think you would want to use the word "conscious." There were still capitalization problems. Capitalizations really play a vital role in writing a piece. It prevents your reader from becoming confused, especially when you use those little fonts. Use commas when ending dialogues which you still intend to describe.
Example: “She’s a freak.” Chris said. should be “She’s a freak,” Chris said. Got that?

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