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With about a hundred grand earned last night, and along with clipping his long old friend for another hundred thousand, Rocky was drawn out, but still ready for some more action to prove himself. This next assignment was a tough one, but it had to be done. Word on the street is that there's an Irish gang, not to sure on how many members yet so far, but it was said that they are trying to take over some racket's on DeCalvacante turf. Wasn't such a good idea to even start with, it sort baffled Rocky on how much balls some people can actually have. The order was given last night after he finished his first job, and it was to important to let go because the underboss assigned it. Not yet a made-man yet, Rocky had a long way to go, but doing such a great job he has the honor to do this assignment with an already made guy. He was given the number that reached Nicky Santorio, so when he finds the information on these guy's he could call him up and meet up. Driving around the streets of Jersey with his window rolled down and a cigarrette dangling from his mouth, as he from time to time checked the rear view mirrors trying to spot a cruiser or an unmarked car, which he always had a routine of doing incase he was being followed. It was going to be pretty hard to find some information about these guy's, so he was given an address of this bar where they usually hang-out, just a headstart for things to get alittle bit more easier so the job don't last all day. Finest Bar was the name of the joint where these Irishmen hung out at. Never really seen, nor heard of this place so it must've been pretty hidden from the city. A little bit of traffic kept him behind, but until he hit the high things got alittle bit more movable and better. Had his piece on him and his cellphone clipped to his belt, he was basically all set for this one, absolutley no worries. Everytime he hit a red light he would take a look at the buisness card that had the address to bar, hopefully finding this hidden street before sunset. The funny part about it was that there was a sun shower earlier, and a big rainbow floating in the sky, basically an Irish fairytale about a big pot of gold at the end of it. Now, if Rocky was stupid, he would try to find the end of the rainbow and look for the men, but that's not how Rocky was he was a smart gangster who had his priorities all straight up. Suddenly, his cellphone started to ring so while driving he grabbed it from the clip and picked it up - "Speak.." - trying to watch the cars infront of him on the road, it was kind of difficult smoking and talking on the phone while driving at the same time. Rocky didn't speak a word he just listened to the other end of the line - "Alright.." - hung it up and placed it back into the clip, while taking a nice smooth drag of his cigarrette. He got some better explained directions to this bar, and it seemed to be that those men were seen exiting the bar, hopefully he would find some clue somewhere that must be floating in that alcahol that was served in the bar. He took a sharp right and drove straight ahead as you can see a sign in the air saying the bar's trademark. There was no parking infront, but there was a back parking lot in back of the bar. So, he drove straight down and took a right entering the parking lot, as he parked into a space and turned off his engine. Took a deep breath for a second and stepped out of the car, he felt like he was a private investigator, it should be pretty fun. Walked out of the lot and made his way to front while swining the doors open and entered the bar. It was pretty packed, mostly all the guys sitting down at the lounge looked pretty smashed, the redness on their cheeks were priceless, it made Rocky chuckle just alittle bit. Without any walking around, or playing some pool, he walked over to the lounge and took a seat at stool knocking his hand on the table waiting to grab the bartenders attention. The smell of this hardcore liquor just wanted to make him gag, but this was buisness and you don't throw-up on an import job - What can I get for ya? - rubbing his chin Rocky looked around at the selections and made a small choice - "Lemme getta scotch on da rocks.." - as the bartender smiled and got right to work on his drink and came back placing it infront of Rocky - "Would ya like anything else lad..?" - he looked around for a second and took a quick sip on his drink throwing some money on the table for the fee. Shrugged his shoulders slightly and got straight to the point - "Say ehh.. you good friends with anybody that hangs down dis joint..?" - the bartender just shrugged and waved to a man walking into a bar - "I've been workin' here for quite some time now.. everybody knows me in here.." - a smirk started to build up on the guy's face, as Rocky took another sip and leaned alittle bit more over the counter - "What I ask you right now better stay to yourself and not get out to any others.. you understand what I'm sayin..?" - Rocky kept a solid look on his face letting this man know that he meant buisness. The guy leaned back and just looked at Rocky with some curiousity, he must've noticed by the way Rocky spoke and just the look that he portrayed that he was from downtown, and everybody knew that those fellas dont play around - "Go ahead spit it out.." - he seemed acceptable, looked like a hard working man that didn't want his kids to see him with two broken hips, so Rocky just started the question asking - "I need some information on some Irish guys pretending to be gangsters.. enough asked.." - the guy squinted his eyes for a second and leaned forward towards Rocky shaking his head looking around for a second - "If it's da men that are tryin' to extort me.. then I'll give you them on a platter.." - Rocky smiled and took another sip of his drink, licked his lips for a second and folded his hands - "Lemme hear da news.." - it seemed like this bartender didn't really like these men, he must've been the owner or something, and this place must've been a target for these wanna-bes to start off making some money - "Well.. they're soft spoken guys that speak with an Irish accent.. but from I what I heard they're nuts.. they've been tryin' to extort me for awhile now but I have been standing up and won't let it happen. It doesn't seem like they got much muscle.. but they come by here everyday. I know where they hang-out because they told me to come by there every Saturday to pay my dues.. but come on what do I work for nothin'..?" - Rocky nodded and took another sip of his drink - "Where's dis hide-out..?" - he took another sip of his drink, shoveling all of this information into his head listening very carefully - "It's by the roast beef diner somewhere around the beach.. they play cards in this small garage that's in the back of the diner.. it's not hidden because I've drove by it before.. and they might be hanging out front of the garage since today is a nice day out.." - Rocky nodded and then took another sip of his drink, trying to think of this place in his mind. He already knew where the beach was, but the garage was going to be hard to find since he wasn't that to familiar of that street. - "How many guys..?" - bartender gave alittle but of a shrug snapping his finger to try to give a ball park answer on how many guys - "Maybe about ten of them.. they're a small gang that's all.." - took another sip and nodded back at the bartender. He then grabbed a few hundreds out of his pocket and placed it into the bartenders hand giving him a nod - "There's ya tip pal.." - took his last sip and got up from the stool as the bartender just look stunned and quickly placing it into his pocket getting right back to work. The money should keep his mouth shut, not letting anybody know what the conversation was about. He had all the information the he needed so he got back into his car and started it up while pulling out of the parking lot making his way down to this parking lot that was only for a clinic down the street. Pulled in and parked his car in an open space. Looked around for a second at hi surroundings and then grabbed his cellphone from his clip dialing Nicky's number. He heard it pick up and heard the greeting from Nicky. - "Come meet me down the clinics parking lot.. I got da information.." - he then hung up and placed his cellphone back into his clip and sat there waiting patiently for Nicky.

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Nick sat in his office smoking a cigar waiting for a call from Rocco. Nick had heard about an Irish gang running around the streets and wanted to make sure they were taken care of. His phone rang on his desk and Nick picked it up. He heard Rocco to meet him at the clinic parking lot. Nick hung up the phone and stood up from his desk putting his jacket on. He walked out of his office and signaled Frankie to follow along with him. The two men walked out of the restaurant and got into Nick’s Ford Excursion. The truck drove out of the parking lot and to the rendezvous spot. They drove for a few minutes when they got to the clinic. Frankie parked the truck next to Rocco’s car and Nick stepped out and got inside Rocco’s car. “So what did you find out?” Nick asked looking over at Rocco.

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Rocky took a cigarrette from his pack and lit it up, as he took a long smooth drag releasing the smoke out of his rolled down window - "It seem's dat these guy's are really tryin' to make a name outta themselves.." - looked around his surroundings for a second because he didn't want to make the parking lot to hot - "They been tryin' to extort dis bar down the corner.. the bartender gave me some information on them.. they hang-out by this diner across da street from da beach. A hidden garage is in back of the diner.. I guess they play cards in there.. and usually on nice day's they sit-out in the sun out front of the garage gettin' fuckin' sunburns.." - he took another drag releasing it into the air, looking straight Nicky shrugging his facial juesture.

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Nick listened to Rocco and thought for a minute. “Alright this should be easy. Let’s go check these guys out” Nick said.

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Rocky nodded and shifted his car into drive and pulled out of the parking lot looking both ways to see if anybody was coming. Pulled out safely and drove straight down passing the bar as he took a quick glimpse of it. The beach was straight down and was on the right after the set of lights. It wasn't so much of a beach, more of a park where people hung-out and walked there dogs. It was a nice day out and it should be pretty filled with people, but it was going to be played and done very smartly. It was in the middle of the evening and the sun was starting to get alittle bit orange, almost time for the sunset to approach. He hit a red light and was about three cars behind. Slowly taking a drag of his butt he just dangled his hand out of the window letting it feel the cool breeze of the nice spring day. It finally became a green light and the cars began to move, Rocky took the right and finally landed on to the beach. Alittle bit of dejavu came about, the streets started to become alittle bit more familiar. In the back of his mind he remembered being pinched here selling cigarrettes to the people that were walking around the beach, which was very long ago when he was in about his teenage years. Looking to the left of him he was trying to find this small roast beef diner, but already no luck - "Where da fuck is dis place.." - getting alittle bit agrivated now because he wanted to get this job done already with. From a distance, he saw a small sign that was on a roof and it read Beach Front's Diner. This had to be the place, so he drove up straight ahead to it and slowed down the pace trying to find this hidden garage. On the left there was an alley-way, on the right side of the diner he viewed half of a garage, so basically this garage was right behind it. There was a man sitting on a lounge chair on the side of the garage smoking a cigar. He was dressed nicely only wearing a wife-beater for his top probably trying to get some sun. Rocky stopped the car totally and looked back at Nicky - "I think we found are traget.." - he looked back at the man sitting and the then looked back at Nicky once again - "I think it would be smart to park in da alley-way.." - so he drove straight ahead at a normal pace and took the left turn, as he took another left turn that lead him to the house where the garage was planted behind the diner. He was going to park by the alley-way beside the garage so they wouldn't be caught, and it was also smart because they could sneek right up on them. Stopped the car and turned off the engine taking another drag of his cigarrette - "You wanna wait awhile..? or get straight to buisness..?" - releasing the smoke from his mouth out of the window into the air waiting to see what Nicky want's to do.

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Nick looked and saw the one man sitting out front of the garage. This should be an easy in and out job, but why take the chance Nick thought and picked up his cell phone. “Frankie, get the boys and meet me behind the Beach Front’s Diner. There is a garage behind it filled with a bunch of Irish pricks needing to be taken out” Nick said and hung up the phone. He looked back over at Rocco “Once the boys get here we’ll move on them” Nick said and sat back in his seat and waited for his men to show up.

Five minutes pass and a Ford Excursion pulled up behind their car. Nick looked in the side window and saw that it was Frankie and three of his gunmen. They were armed with Berettas and ready for action. Nick reached into his jacket and pulled out his silenced Beretta M9. He checked it and made sure that it was loaded. He stepped out of the car and walked over to Frankie. “Alright you guys take out the henchman and me and Rocco get the leaders” Nick said and Frankie nodded to him. Nick walked back to the car and spoke to Rocco “When your ready.”

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Rocky took a long drag of his butt and flicked it out of the window while releasing it out from his mouth. He grabbed his gun from his waist band and cocked it back - "Let's do it.." - then stepped out of the vehicle aiming his gun down slowly creeping up to the side of the garage as Nicky was behind him in the same position. His guy's were right beside him with their guns ready for some action. The day had just turned into night, and the street lights were on real bright. A quick little peek over and he could view the man that was sitting on the lounge chair getting up putting his covering shirt on buttoning it up. He gave the signal to wait, as he slowly crept up to the man and wrapped his left arm around his neck and kept his gun aimed to his temple - "Don't you fuckin' move you here me..?" - he whispered, as the man just stood still frozen. Rocky waved his hand signaling the rest of the guys to troop on in - "How do you open up da door..?" - the guy didn't seem to budge he just kept his mouth shut, so Rocky gave him alittle bit of jolt - "I'm gonna ask you one more fuckin time.. how do you open up da fuckin door.." - still no answer from this guy, so Rocky looked over at Nicky and then very forcefully smashed the guy's head into the garage once and then winded up and smashed it again as if a knock. The guy felt right to his knees moaning softly holding his battered in head as there were some voices in the garage, sound like some Irish accent voices, it must be the men. He then picked up the guy again and wrapped his left arm around his neck and kept the gun held to his temple, if the trigger is pulled his brains will be in pieces. Rocky gave the men the signal, so Nick stood beside him and the other guys stood beside the garage door waiting to blast. Any minute now the door should be opening.

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Nick stood on the side of the garage with Frankie and Rocco while the other three men stood on the other side. They heard a loud clink and the garage door slid open. �What the fuck is it?� a man yelled as he lifted the door up and over his head. The inside of the garage was small with a poker table in the center of it. Six men sat around it while the other two stood watching. The man that opened the door didn�t realize whom he had opened the door to until he looked and saw the six men standing there with guns aimed at him. Nick lifted his gun and shot two rounds into the man�s chest. The men at the poker table saw this and reached for their guns. One of the men sitting behind the table dove down under it for cover. Nick�s men started to unload on the men. The men at the table shook as the bullets ripped through their bodies. Two of the Irishmen managed to get their guns out, but were shot down before pulling the trigger. Blood splattered onto the walls and the men screamed in agony, as they were being rittled with holes. Nick�s men stopped firing once they figured they did enough damage. Nick smelled the mix of gunpowder and blood in the air. He walked inside the garage and saw a man still under the table hiding. Nick lifted his gun and shot a round into the man�s hand and watched as he rolled out from under the table. �Hey you want to take care of this guy?� Nick asked looking over at Rocco.

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Rocky just looked at all of the dead bodies inside of the garage, this couldn't get any better than the St. Valentine's Day Massacre. He still had his left arm wrapped around the other guy with his gun still aimed at his temple. He was shaking and breathing very heavily - "Please.. please don't kill me.." - a very strong accent he had, Rocky could hardly make out what he was saying but he started to play dumb - "I'm sorry what did you say..?" - before the guy could even say something he pulled the trigger -BAM- right into the temple as blood and pieces of brain splattered against the garage wall and some on Rocky's sleeve. It was a very disgusting sight, this guy's head literally a bowl of spaghetti and red meat gravy. After the shock of a big explosion that he created by shooting him in the head, he finally dropped him where he stood and walked up to the other man that seemed to be the leader because he was the best dressed one in there. He looked over at Nicky with a smirk - "I'd love to.." - he couldn't have done it without Nicky, there were to many men and Rocky could have been killed without him, he owed him one. So, he slowly walked up to the man that was lying on the floor moaning in pain while holding his bullet hole wounded hand. Stood right above him with his gun aiming right to his upper chest - "Please.. please..! don't fuckin' shoot me..!!" - enough with these Irish accents he just wanted to get rid of them and never hear these accents again. This man was actually pleading for his life, if Rocky gave him an offer this man would take it in a heartbeat, but this was buisness, what to be done had to be done - "Don't fuckin' shoot me..!!!!" - he shrugged his shoulders and took a look around at the men and then looked right back at the man lying on the ground - "Sorry.. dis is our turf.. not yours.." - the man covered his face with his arms and started to roll around - "Noooo..!!!!" - Rocky began to pull the trigger numerous of times -BAM BAM BAM BAM- but the man was still rolling around so he wasted the rest of his bullets -BAM BAM BAM BAM- a few more right to upper back and one in the neck. He started to jerk for a few seconds but then stopped, he walked up to him and felt his pulse - "He's gone.." the man was apparently dead and all of the other members were dead - "Let's get da fuck outta here.." - he slowly walked away placing his gun back into his waist-band as Nicky and the other guy's followed him back to their cars. Rocky stepped in and started up the engine as Nicky hopped in aswell. Nicky's men behind them backed up and drove-off into the night as Rocky pulled out and drove his way down to the clinics parking lot. Looking around a few times to see if he saw any red and blue lights but none were seen, a few sirens were heard from a distance but that was it. He took the right turn and drove straight forward to the clinics parking lot. Pulled over beside Nicky's car and saw that the man that was driving him was still in the driver's seat. He let him go and waited until he got in the car and left. As for Rocky, he just took out a cigarrette from his pack and lit it up while taking a nice long smooth drag. He then pulled out of the parking lot and drove-off. He past by the bar as it was still open and thought to himself - "Dat guy won't be bothered anymore.. whata fuckin' night.." - he took another drag and released the smoke out of the window into the night's air and drove-off unnoticed in the night.

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Mine.

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Fast-paced. Good. There's a difference between "your" (which refers to ownership), and "you're" (which is a contraction of "you are"). There could have been more effort from your part though, Santorio.

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