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M.S.R.P. II • View topic - Hostile takeover [NPC Recruitment/Takeover]

M.S.R.P. II

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 13, 2006 10:07 pm 
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Just when I thought I was out...
They pulled me back in.

{NPC'S}
{1x} Class A Gunman,

{WEAPONS}
[1x]
[2x]

{ACCESSORIES}
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You know you were >< that close to a 20 grand creativity bonus..

Alright, this ain't a secret...this is my kind of heist. Everything you did in that heist, I loved. You had wit, you had a buildup, and you had a nice little twist with the NPC. For some reason I thought you'd recruit the bouncer...guess I'm a little slow. I liked the personality you gave to David, it really brought him to life for me. I liked this line: "Okay, be fucking cool, or we're all fucked. I say that in a 'everyone's getting shot' way.". I swear...if I robbed a joint, I'd definately use that line. All the convos were great, and almost everything was perfect.

Here's my problem with this heist. The end was too easy. The man owns a Mercedes dealership and he signs it over to you no questions no complaints? Kind of broke the flow for me, you know? Now unless I'm a complete moron and misunderstood your thing completely, he just signed over the papers to you as soon as you pointed the gun at him..That just didn't work for me. If that had been a minor section, we wouldn't have a problem but that was an important part of the storyline, hence where the problem comes in.

Outcome:

This was too great of a heist for me to deny. Seriously, I loved everything about it too much to say 'no' to your requests. I am however, not gonna give you the creativity bonus I had wanted to give you due to the unrealism of the signing itself.

One Mercedes dealership Approved
The NPC's needed to run it Approved-You get them all, minus the manager who quit. You're going to have to get yourself a new manager.
David Roland, Class B Gunman Approved- [1x] Class A Gunman


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