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M.S.R.P. II • View topic - "Goin' Out With A Bang"

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Southern Palermo, Sicily
April 22nd, 2006

It was a warm, perfect afternoon. The birds were singing, the sun shone on the water, and a soft breeze was in the air. Unfortunately, Miss Angelina DeSalle could not be outside to enjoy the day. When she usually would have been out basking by the pool of her lovely Villa Le Terrae, Angelina was doing research on a particularly troublesome man called Piero Adriano. He was an ardent soldier of the Depaolo family, as well as a prosperous drug dealer. The forty-year-old man was loaded with cash and had connections all over Italy. He could pose as a threat to the Canelupo family if he got the chance and had the motivation. So, Angelina had made it her job to take care of him. She’d been tracking him for days now and saw him fall into an extremely predictable habit.

Every morning, Mr. Adriano woke around 9:00am, showered, dressed, and walked down to the nearest café for a cup of coffee and a croissant. He then returned back to his ritzy apartment, made a few calls, then took out his motorcycle to go check up on the men who sold his drugs for him. This was Angelina’s favorite part. Piero’s motorcycle was absolutely gorgeous and she longed for it with a passion. The bike was a sleek, silver BMW R1150R, and brand new. If all went as planned, Angelina promised herself that bike as her payment. At any rate, Mr. Adriano’s drug outlet was based at a secluded warehouse, far from Palermo and down a long, vacant dirt road. After a good few miles of nothing but uninhabited country, the road came into a sleazy little town. Even the police shied away from the place. Once he’d arrived, Mr. Adriano spent the entire afternoon behind the closed doors of the warehouse, then he was off again, now carrying a hefty dufflebag full of cash. On his way home, he usually stopped and had dinner at a family-run pizzeria before at last arriving back in Southern Palermo. At night, he sometimes met with his girlfriend and spent the evening with her, but more often he just went back to his own apartment and went to bed. All in all, his schedule was very easy for Angelina to follow, and made him a very easy target for her to kill.

-The Next Day-

Angelina spent the morning relaxing, as she did just before every job. She finished a mystery novel, went for a swim at the beach, and practiced a particularly difficult piece on the piano. Around noon, she decided it was about time to go to work. She showered and dressed casually before leaving her home. She carried a suitcase in one hand and walked into town. She waved over a taxi and directed him to the country road that led to Mr. Adriano’s warehouse. As it turned out, she had timed herself perfectly. Not far up ahead, she could see Piero’s bike, speeding away for his daily inspection.

Angelina asked the driver to slow a little, just to look a bit less suspicious, then let him drive on. Soon enough, the silver motorcycle had disappeared into the distance. After a few more miles, the taxi came to a little abandoned shack off the side of the road. Angelina had spotted it a few days earlier and thought that it would make a perfect place for her to wait for Piero. She had already decided to clip him on his way home. That way, she could collect the money he always left the warehouse with. She had also come out to this shack the night before to dig a deep hole in the ground nearby. It would serve as Piero’s grave. She couldn’t very well leave the body on the road for everyone to see.

Angelina at last asked the driver to stop at the shack and she got out. The burly man in the front seat looked at her thoughtfully, most likely wondering what business a pretty girl like her had out in the middle of nowhere. But as she paid him his money, as well as a little extra, then thanked him for the ride, he did not question her. Angelina waited for the taxi to disappear down the road from which she’d came, then stepped into the half-destroyed shed to have a look around. It’s front door faced outwards, towards the road. That would be a perfect place to take aim. Smiling at her luck, she set down her suitcase and pulled out a sniper. She casually assembled and loaded it then rested the gun over her shoulder. Then she plopped down on the dusty floor with her weapon, opened the front door, and stared out at the road intently. Now all she had to do was wait.

Hours passed and Angelina began to grow impatient. Piero still hadn’t shown up yet. She breathed a heavy sigh and looked at the silver watch that circled her left wrist. She’d been waiting three hours. Usually Mr. Adriano was finished with his business by now… Then, just as she began to doubt her plan, the sound of a speeding motorcycle broke through the silence.

Angelina nudged the door of the shack open a little wider and leaned over to peer out. Down the road she could see Mr. Adriano, approaching speedily on his bike. A smirk creased the killer’s lips and she stood up with her gun. She absently fondled the sniper as she waited for Piero to come into range. Her fingers slid over the smooth surface of the weapon before closing around the trigger. She’d found the gun in a storage closet of her late husband’s villa, and had rather grown attached to it. She could only hope that it wouldn’t let her down. She considered Mr. Adriano to be a rather important job. It would be a shame for her plan to go wrong.

As the motorcycle came nearer, Angelina raised the gun and peered through the scope. She stood in the doorway of the shed, and apparently in plain view, for as Piero came nearer, his speed slowed. He must have seen her. But before he could react, Angelina took aim and squeezed the trigger. A loud ’bang’ sounded and a bullet shot the man right between the eyes. His body tumbled off the motorcycle and rolled to the side of the road, right near Angelina’s shack. Looking down, she could see dark red blood pool beneath his head and stain the dirt. Another smirk played upon her lips. She looked at her gun in happy praise, then disassembled it and stowed it back in the suitcase. She then hopped down from the shed to Mr. Adriano’s body. After pulling his house keys out of his pocket, she reached down, grabbed his ankles, and dragged him unceremoniously through the dirt to the back of the shack. She dumped him into the ditch she’d dug the evening before and straightened. She sighed and got to work covering the hole up again. About half an hour later, she was finally done.

Just as the sun started to set, Angelina trotted back to the road and hoisted up the discarded motorcycle. She dusted off the sleek, silver exterior and sighed in relief when to find that it was hardly scratched. She also noted a particularly hefty dufflebag strapped to the back of the bike. She pulled down the zipper and smirked at the contents of the bag - large numbered bills wrapped in wads with rubber bands. It was well worth the trouble of killing Mr. Adriano. Plus, the gorgeous BMW bike was now hers. The key was left in the ignition, so all Angelina had to do was get on, and drive off. And within moments, she had done just that.

As much as Angelina would have liked to speed home on her new bike, she had a quick stop to make first. So, after arriving back in Palermo, Angelina pulled into the driveway of Piero Adriano’s ritzy apartment. She got off the motorcycle and headed to the front door. After pulling Piero’s keys out of her pocket and unlocking the door, she walked inside, just to see if she could find anything of interest. She spent an hour going through the apartment, but didn’t find much. She did however come across a pretty assortment of knives, which she hastily wrapped up and smuggled out of the apartment. She locked the door and headed down to her bike. In a few moments, she was off again. And this time, she was heading home. All in all, she was quite satisfied with how the day turned out.

Requests:

- the reader's enjoyment of my very modest heist
- x amount of money found in the duffel bag
- BMW R1150R motorcycle
- collection of knives
- a clean getaway

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I enjoyed it. Thing is, I can't just let you get away with a pretty much unscathed bike. Throw in a few scratches there, but you ought to be able to take care of it. The bike's still running when you sniped the man. :p Just me, tweaking. HE he he... Enjoy the rest of the stuff. I liked the simple structure of your piece. Very effective.

Oh! And enjoy thirty thousand. I decided on that amount since I didn't really any reason why he should be carrying that amount of money. Is it because he's off to do business? What?
That enough? Hit me up if it isn't. We'll work on it. ^^,

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