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M.S.R.P. II • View topic - Paolo, Your Just a Shot Away From Meeting Death[PC Hit]

M.S.R.P. II

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 21, 2006 4:58 am 
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Li3k Z3 D3ath 0f Paolo Conte

Ordered by: Don Barzini and Allies.
Reason: War.

Requesting:

-Ze Death of Paolo Conte
-Ze Death of the Cute Bellhopper
-Class X Hitman Status
-Clean Getaway

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-I w0uld li3k an 0rd3r 0f Killing Plz?-

The day began as Brandon and I were heading to the gym for a socalled workout. As we pulled up to a stoplight a few blocks from the hotel, I received a call. I picked up my cell and saw it was the agency. It had been a long time since they had called for me. I guess they thought a queer couldn’t handle a lot of hits. I picked up the phone and said with a somber voice. “Hello.” The man said to me in a tone, which seemed very uplifted. “Dylan? This is the agency. We need something done.” At that precise moment, I grew a very depressed look on my face. Brandon turned to me and knew something was wrong. I motioned for him to pull over and responded back to the man. “You guys haven’t contacted me in a while. What sup with that?” He said after he chuckled a bit. “Well we were saving you for our important jobs that’s all.” I knew he was preaching bullshit. I was probably going to get some low class nobody to kill; yet I responded in a passive voice filled with excitement. “ Oh really? What kind of job needs done?” He said as he shifted his tone to very serious like. “International Job. Palermo. The pay is good if the job is done right.” Suddenly, I grew ecstatic about this assignment. I was sick of all this cold ass weather here. It was time to go to a place where it’s hot, not to mention the hot Italian men there. I said to him. “ I’ll do it.” The man said to me. “ Good. Take the next flight out of Jersey. Bring a suitcase. The exchange will be with a man who has blonde hair and green eyes. He will be carrying a suitcase with a silver buckle with the name Lao T.1234. "Good Luck Dylan.” The man hung up before I had a chance to thank him for the opportunity.

I turned to Brandon and said. “To the airport instead baby. We got business in Palermo.” Brandon grew a smirk on his face and turned the vehicle around. We drove for about twenty minutes before we reached Atlantic City International Airport. Brandon parked the car after they scanned the lot for open spaces. We stepped out of the car and headed towards the lobby as I carried the suitcase. I decided to leave all weapons in the car to avoid any security problems. We entered the airport after a few minutes of walking passed. Once we entered the airport, the sounds of people’s constant chatting over their tickets filled my ears. We walked towards into one of the lines and waited there until it was our time to buy tickets. We stepped up to the counter and I said to the woman. “Two tickets to Palermo please.” The woman printed out the tickets and set them down on the counter before us. She said to us as she finished typing up the necessary information that we had given. “ 2000 dollars please… Will that be credit or check?” I pulled out my wad of 100-dollar bills and said. “We’ll pay in cash thank you.” I counted out 20 hundreds and handed it to her. She looked at me with a look of lethargy before she put it in the register and I grabbed the tickets. Brandon and me got onto the plane with our suitcase and as we left, my eyes slowly drifted their way to sleep. Brandon grinned at me as I sat there sleeping and began to read a magazine as we headed towards Palermo.


-Li3k a m00n in th3 sky-

Five hours passed of rigorous flying experience before we finally touched down in Palermo. Brandon shook me a bit to wake me up as the plane stopped on the runway. I instantly woke up and rubbed my eyes a bit before I stood up and walked off of the plane after I grabbed my suitcase from the upper storage. We entered the library and suddenly my eyes grew as I stared around the airport. This airport was nothing like the ones back in the States. The condition of the airport was way up to par with my standards. There wasn’t such a hassle for tickets and it was much quieter then the American airports. I grinned as I looked towards my boyfriend. I saw in his face that he was also impressed by such cleanliness. I patted him on the shoulder and followed me to the rent-a-car station. We stood there in line patiently for about 15 minutes and finally arrived at the front of the line. I said to the woman in Italian. “Ciao, lei parla degli inglesi?” The woman answered in English, but with a deep Italian accent. “Yes I cana speaka English.” I put a light smirk on my face and immediately said. “Good… What cars do you have?” She said to me after she checked her computer for all available cars. “We have a Toyota Camry left sir.” I nodded to her as I said. “ Good. We will take it.” She asked me. “What is your name?” I said to her as I handed her a fake I.D with the name Franklin Hughes. She typed in all of the information and handed me the keys. “You will pay when you turn it in. Right now. We need a down payment of 20 American dollars.” I handed her the twenty dollars and grabbed the keys. We began to look around for our contact in Sicily, we scanned the airport as if it we were some of electronic contraption for the man. It was not until five minutes later, that we spotted him standing over in the corner smoking a cigarette. This man was wearing an Islander shirt with some very thick sunglasses. We walked over to the man and said to him. “You got a cigarette?” He lifted his head up and said to me. “ Yeah. Need a light?” Brandon set down the suitcase and after a few minutes of pretending to have a conversation, we nodded to the man and took his suitcase. It wasn’t the way the information was supposed to be exchanged, but we did what we had to do. Brandon and me proceeded to the car lot. As we stepped outside, we slipped on our sunglasses and stood there for a few minutes as we admired how beautiful Palermo was. Palermo had beautiful trees, beautiful weather, and some hot men. I grinned towards Brandon, who was staring with a slight smirk on his face. I tapped him on the shoulder and we walked swiftly towards the car. I handed the suitcase to Brandon and we both entered the car. I started the ignition softly as Brandon opened up the case for the information and I pulled off of the car lot and onto the afternoon streets of Sicily.

Enclosed in the case was the information of the target and two silenced pistols. Brandon opened up the case steadily. He picked up a silver Colt 45 with a thick rubber grip. Brandon kept the guns inside of the case to avoid unwanted attention, while he reviewed over the information. The target was Paolo Conte. It seems this guy had a luxurious hotel that the contractor wanted. This information listed all of Paolo’s available information and the address of his hotel.

I turned onto the back street behind the luxurious hotel. I decided to park in an alley. Once the car was parked and ready to go, I looked towards Brandon and said to him. “Okay.. do you have any ideas on how we could hit this bastard.?” Brandon shook his vaguely and we sat there pondering over how to do this job. From what the information told us, he had twelve guards in the place, all armed with standard Glocks. About twenty minutes passed and I felt myself getting a little impatient. I was about to call it quits, but when I saw that a porter, or as they call a bell hopper in the States, had stepped out of the hotel to have himself a cigarette, a light bulb finally came on.. He was all by himself. It was perfect, just perfect. I grinned as I removed myself from the wall, and walked up to the young bell hopper.. “Do you have a cigarette?” As the young hopper began searching for another cigarette, I struck him in the neck. The young hopper fell out of consciousness and I rubbed out his cigarette. The hopper was cute, but this was business. I had Brandon help me take off of his clothes. I enjoyed doing that, and by the look on Brandon’s face, he did too. Once we had all of the proper uniform parts, we picked him up and through him in a dumpster. We walked back to the car and I picked up one of the silenced pistols. I walked back towards the dumpster and discharged two shells of high quality steel into his warm flesh before I closed the top. I changed into the bell hopper uniform and tucked the gun under my shirt so that it wouldn’t be obvious. I kissed Brandon and walked into the hotel with my hat almost fully covering my face. Brandon walked back into the car to wait for me. He grabbed the other pistol and continued to scout for any trouble. Meanwhile, I was walking through the hallway slowly as I scouted for the target. I was looking in every room that I passed throughout the elongated hallaway. I continued this invigorating process until I saw the target passing through the hallway by the meeting room. I looked over both shoulders for any stupid fucking security guards. I saw the coast was clear and walked behind the target, as he was entering the meeting room. Before I decided to pull out my gun, I once again looked over my shoulders for any guards. I pulled out the gun and fired one steady shot in the head of the middle aged man. The blood spattered all over the nice corporate table. I tucked the gun back under my shirt and resumed my slow pace until I arrived at the stairway. I headed down to the first floor. Once I was at the designated floor, I opened the door stealthily to look for any suspicious guards. After a few seconds, I opened the door fully and headed back out to the alley. Brandon and I put the guns in the dumpster along with the stupid bell hopper uniform and I quickly slid back on my clothes.. We entered the car and Brandon backed the car up to the street behind the hotel. Once we we made a pull 180 degree move, Brandon set the car in drive and we headed off.

After we had gotten far away from the hotel, we decided to go to a fancy Italian restaurant named Fabio’s for dinner. We pulled into an available parking space and we both stepped out with our sunglasses equipped. We entered the restaurant with grins on our faces as if we hadn’t just committed murder. I said to the woman in Italian. “Una tavola per due per favore?” She nodded as she grabbed two menus and we headed over to our table. We sat opposite of each other and she handed us both menus. After we sat there looking over the menus, we decided on two orders of Chicken Vesuvio and a bottle of red wine. The waitress wrote down the order and headed off to process the order as Brandon and I stared into each other’s eyes with such passion and romance. We could only stare at each other for so long until our soft lips touched each other’s. We began to kiss more intensely as the background customers turned their attention towards us. A few minutes of kissing passed and our food arrived. This service was superb compared to the service back in America. We grinned to each other as we began to eat with the moon coming out of the clouds. It was a sharp day in Palermo for these two, young, gay men.


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- This one was quick and to the point, nothing wrong with that. You used cleverness instead of guns blazing to take the target out, nice work. I enjoy most of it, but felt out of place with the whole two men kissing thing. I felt as if I shouldn't be reading it, but that's probably because I'm new to that on this site... Nice job.

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